Almost all of your edges are the same thickness. I would consider making some edges more beveled and rounded than others. This could help make things more interesting and add a bit more variety.
Yup the barrel is too big, and you missed the iron site on it. As tobo says take a crack and making it less uniform.
Its a pretty sweet piece either way, but the concept definitely has a more lived in feel.
It took about a full day's work in total, not too bad - it's a pretty simple model really, just looks way more complex than it actually is
I'll probably bake it down to a low poly model, indeed - I'll probably wear the model down a bit first though, as you say - there should be a bit more variety and tear, some of which I'll put in the diffuse texture as well.
I'll downsize the barrel, thanks for the feedback! And yeah, it does need a lens and iron sights too, thanks for pointing that out
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How long did it take you to make it?
Almost all of your edges are the same thickness. I would consider making some edges more beveled and rounded than others. This could help make things more interesting and add a bit more variety.
Also consider putting in a lens for the sight. It looks hollow right now.
Its a pretty sweet piece either way, but the concept definitely has a more lived in feel.
It took about a full day's work in total, not too bad - it's a pretty simple model really, just looks way more complex than it actually is
I'll probably bake it down to a low poly model, indeed - I'll probably wear the model down a bit first though, as you say - there should be a bit more variety and tear, some of which I'll put in the diffuse texture as well.
I'll downsize the barrel, thanks for the feedback! And yeah, it does need a lens and iron sights too, thanks for pointing that out