Meepo set WIP "crits plz"

jamesman5000

hey I'm pretty new to this stuff but here's what I've done so far it's still in its infancy.

concept:





i know its pretty basic stuff but its enough for me to work from

model:



i might upload to sketchfab if some one wants to have a better look

ShorkGamer

Well I would say it is too simple. It needs some jaw droping features.

jamesman5000

thanks for the suggestion, I did a bit work on it so are you talking about stuff like this? or where you talking about more detail?



edit: I probably should of have baked a AO map

MagnoHusein

For the concept, I guess you should put a theme to the set, like adventurer/miner/hunter or something that fits his lore in someway etc, it gives value to the items and helps you to figure out the "jaw dropping" features like shorkgamer said above.

The first image silhoette is pretty weak, in the modelling went better since you added more shapes of the backpack.

For the modelling, you are showing us the base mesh, there's not much to say about it.

jamesman5000

yeah I think might start over and draw out solid theme/concept and do it properly