Stylised Chest

JoshVanZuylen

Hey guys,

Decided to make a stylised chest.

I'm trying to improve my skills in this style so any critiques would be great!



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Deathstick

Heh.. I expected something else from the title...

I'm digging it so far, but I'd say the metal trim texture could use a little bit more loving as compared to the wood. It's a tad too "blurry."

ZacD

The detail on the key plate is too small, sharp, and straight compared to the rest of the model.

Dimfist

I would push the shapes a bit more. I don't see stylized really.

heboltz3

The wood feels laminated, or finished. I'd think a bit more juxtaposition of flat spec v shiny metal might do ya some good.

JoshVanZuylen

@Deathstick To be honest, once ~I had done the wood I came to the metal and was stumped... I couldn't figure out how I was going to tackle it, It is defiantly an area for improvement!

@ZacD I agree, once of the last things I did to just push it out before the deadline I had set myself.

@Dimfist Noted!~

@heboltz3 I had it looking right in 3Do, but when I took it into Sketchfab it destroyed the material definition.... as always. will look out for this in the future!