The bottom of the tie bothers me a bit - the torn sleeve makes sense, but the tie really should be in better shape.
The coat seams are much too prominent unless it's a leather jacket. The wrinkles on the sleeves should be concentrated under the arms and around the elbow, while those on the back should be concentrated around the small of the back and between the shoulder blades. The coat is missing both button holes and buttons.
To add a bit of zombie surrealism, you might want to have him holding something from his life. A briefcase or a clipboard would be a common idea, but the headset from a traditional phone with a dangling wire might be a more interesting choice.
To add a bit of zombie surrealism, you might want to have him holding something from his life. A briefcase or a clipboard would be a common idea, but the headset from a traditional phone with a dangling wire might be a more interesting choice.
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The coat seams are much too prominent unless it's a leather jacket. The wrinkles on the sleeves should be concentrated under the arms and around the elbow, while those on the back should be concentrated around the small of the back and between the shoulder blades. The coat is missing both button holes and buttons.
To add a bit of zombie surrealism, you might want to have him holding something from his life. A briefcase or a clipboard would be a common idea, but the headset from a traditional phone with a dangling wire might be a more interesting choice.
Bluetooth earpiece or Google glass?