Industrial Divinities -19WT

seforin

I have been cranking on this guy on and off for a while now and I figured I should make a thread vs being a secret squirrel about this. I have been so busy the last few years working on my own projects/freelance/games I feel Im falling behind the curve!

so I decided I needed to up my game some and make some more complex art for a change while moving into the PBR workflow and complex based asset modeling for large pieces.

I decided to work on one of the pieces by Izumo Jyuki


the 19wT Version.

I tried to give it a bit more life by adding a inner interior as well.

Heres a few Renders of the high and the start of texturing in the low bellow that. (Being done in marmoset 2 FYI)

Thanks everyone!

Concept:




HIGHS:











LOW BAKES:

RyanB

Looks good so far. Your version has slightly longer legs which changes the look. The original has more of a bulldog appearance with shorter, squatter legs and a beefier top.

s6

Double it

odd_enough

Needs more lens flare.

s6

seforin

How can I make it sci-fi without lens flare! Im obviously doing it wrong!

Until it looks like the new star-trek I should just start over.

s6

Shrike

The graphic design , the color and the shading of that artist (and the pose and exact perspective!) are a vital part of the aesthetics of that concept
Your edges are also really soft on the legs

The "head" of the concept is also standing out a lot more than yours

seforin

hey this is some great feedback.

I do understand I extended the legs slightly and the head I made slightly shorter, I felt that it made it feel more structurely sound originally. As the head over extending past the front made it very top heavy and the legs didnt have a place to properly arc/rotate if I had left them with the mid section extension as short.

I will try and play with its posing and perspective to show its not entirely to far off.

But I wanted to show a little progress on the texturing of this guy.

I will continue to truck on him.

s6

Hey, Good rips man, and it's definitely improving. I'd work on spec and gloss a bit more. Right now the highlights are limited, and what we do catch in the render are very high spec and high gloss, which make it look wet almost. Have you collected material reference for what you'd like to achieve?

Looking good though, Coming along nicely. The lens and the lights are looking cool. I like the minimalist texture style so far, Nice clean look.

Maybe roll in some of his "Limbs" and match the stance of the concept. He looks a little stiff atm.

seforin

well I took alot of the feedback given to me both on here and privately and have done a major over hall on a number of things, played around with him , gave a little pose. Tweaked the materials to feel more like real life materials . And overall just tried to make this feel like something fun.

This was a fun little project.

ausernottaken

The model and textures are great, though I think it could have a more interesting color scheme. I would deviate from the concept a bit and make some of the parts a different color like grey and orange.

seforin

decided to play with a pattern and tweak textures further

Darkleopard

Hey man, really like where its going.

To me the material looks more concrete than metal. I'm not sure what what you're after but pumping up the spec a little might help if you want to go for a more metal look

seforin

I had gotten some feedback and decided to push this once more.

chriszuko

looking pretty cool! I really dig alot of what is going on. With your most recent color scheme.. The yellow plate on its head reallllly sticks out. I feel if you just took another 10-20 min to get some wear and tear or .. scuffs.. or grime on that section and maybe desat the yellow just a tad it will look a little less weird to me. Really awesome stuff!