Sci Fi Robot Env

michaelkr

Hey guys,
Ive been a huge fan of polycount and ive finally decided its time to make my first post. This is an environment ive been working on in my spare time. Any critiques would be awesome!

thanks

Sardu

Looks fantastic so far. I think the plaster looks a little too clean where it's supposed to be broken. Also, do you have the same specular on both the plaster and the brick? Both seem to shine the light the same way, but the brick would not be as reflective as something like plaster which usually has a coating.

michaelkr

thanks for the awesome critiques. i messed with the spec of both the brick and plaster.

JamesTKirk

Cool! Is it maschinen krieger?

Darkleopard

The wall feels a little flat. Is it just a texture or did you sculpt it at all?

Zin83

Looks cool. Adding some actual geometry for some of the bricks would be nice. Also adding some bigger cracks coming from the broken out plaster. I would also like to see maybe some old wall paper that is no longer sticking and falling off the wall.

ActionDawg

a couple problems I see with this scene conceptually: how did the robot get in the room and could the floor really support its weight, especially if its moving around? the robot really conflicts with the space that it's in.

WarrenM

I think this looks cool but the bricks are too large. They make the robot seem off in scale ...

michaelkr

thanks so much for all the great feedback guys. I'll have something new posted in a few days with the changes.

michaelkr

hey james, im actually not sure if its maschinen krieger or not. I just have a folder with tons of concept work and i just grabbed it from there.

MeshModeler

I would much rather like to see some shots of just the robot in marmo, Right now i cant even see the front of it.

As far as the env that its in, the scale of the bricks are too large and the normal information (if there is any) isn't reading well at all. the spec and gloss might be a little high on the walls, i don't think plaster should be that reflective like it is on the left side.

The texturing on the robot looks good from what i see, keep it up