Hipster/Urban Female Sniper WIP

LeonR

Hi guys, This is my first post on Polycount. I'm starting a new model for my portfolio and I could really use some feedback on it.

The general idea for this character was making a sniper that could get around the city without being suspected. I haven't gotten very far, I wanted to make sure that the anatomy was correct first.

ShockInfinite

I think it looks good but the face could be a bit more feminine.

DEugenio

Looking good so far. I suggest shortening her arms as they are a bit long.

Mossbros

A lot of forms with the face seem to have been missed/smoothed over.

I really suggest going back to your lowest subdivision and sorting out all the major muscle areas and bone structure of the face before moving on.
No woman's face is that smooth, not even in anime.



Horrible reference, but there's not much out there in regards to female facial muscles without finding a terrible artists interpretation of it.

LeonR

Thanks for the feedback guys. Still working on the face but I think the rest of the model is coming along nicely and I've started on the clothes.

LeonR

Here is an update for the sniper. I'm almost done with this part but I do think I should add something else to the model but I am not sure what.

Inhert

Another thing to watch out for is the length of her arms. Holy molle she's got orangutan arms. The length of the arms just looks off unless you intentionally wanted her to have unnaturally long arms.

LeonR

Inhert- Thanks Ill defiantly fix that.