Dungeon [WIP]

Greenmutze

Hey guys,

im working on a Dungeon at the moment and started to use UDK. It is still a work in progress. I will add some more assets and work on the lighting, but i hope u like it so far. Comments are welcome.

pixelpatron

Not a bad start, but it's looking too generic at the moment.

Find some inspiration:

Greenmutze

thank you for the reply pixelpatron. I think i have some ideas to get a better "non-generic" look

chrisradsby

Good work so far man I feel like this piece needs a more interesting center-piece, a more interesting focal point.

and don't get lazy Even chains in the roofs attach to something Keep up the good work!

Greenmutze

Thx chrisradsby. I think i will research for some more concepts and hope i find something unique.

Greenmutze

i think i will add a door at the and of the hallway

DWalker

It's rather dry for a dungeon. I'd expect small puddles of water, and possibly some water damage on the walls.

The torches should produce smoke, and possibly the occasional spark as well. The walls should also have soot marks above the torches.

The candles could use some dripping wax along the sides, and possibly on the holder as well. The chains holding the candle holders also just end abruptly at the ceiling; realistically, they'd pass through an eye before dropping to waist-level so they could be raised/lowered for refilling/lighting, but even a plate bolted to the ceiling would help sell the current design.

The ceiling feels very bland at the moment.

Cobwebs, dust, and refuse would add realism to the scene.

Greenmutze

THX DWalker for the critic. Some of your points i already have on my To-Do-List but still a helpful comment.

I also have a small update for you

Greenmutze

Ahoy Ahoy,

I have some new shots for you. I played a little bit with the light, added some puddles (too clean at the moment) and added beams on the ceiling (not sure if they match to the rest)

DWalker

There's an odd yellow aura in the first of the new images.

The flagstones appear to be the same size as the stones in the wall; in general, they'll be much larger.

A few rats might help to liven up the place.