Old_restroom_UDK

JGreentheRookie

This will be a small abbandoned restroom.

Here is a first render out of udk.

I'm using my real life restroom as reference. :poly142:

JGreentheRookie

so here is a small update , I din't texture the lamp yet.

any critique welcome

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NurmanZh

Nice work

Shad0w_Walker

Looks fine to me, but the problem is, that we don't have a reference. So we can't really judge it by now.

Cheers,
Shad0w_Walker

AndrewD

Looking great so far, would like to see your reference.

I find the wall tiles a little distracting, mainly the pattern. Maybe reduce the saturation or make it stand out less.

Shad0w_Walker

@ AndrewD: Totally agree with that.

TheBat

Looking good sofar, but here's a few comments:

Firstly, why are your tiles all different kinds of sizes? It would seem a lot more natural to me that the tiles are all the same size (standard).

Secondly, make sure your tiles are arranged in the same pattern. The wall tiles at the window for example, it's a bit weird that the first tile below the winow is offset a bit in comparison to the tiles at the left side of the window.

Also make sure that the spacing between the tiles is all the same, for example at the left side of the wall where the tiles are supposed to meet. The left wall-tiles are much closer to the corner-side than the right side wall-tiles.

Keep up the good work!

JGreentheRookie

Here is some of the reference

JGreentheRookie

small update

I'm still deciding if I should let the pipe red. What do u guys think?

JGreentheRookie

update !!!

Texture for toilet and plant is in Progress

snake85027

looking good, get some decals around the bottom of the toilet, maybe some toilet water leaks or soemthing

JGreentheRookie

Thanx, I'm just texturing the toilet. Decals will follow

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update on texture, also added a liitle bit of fog

chriszuko

Looking good so far! I dig all of the grime. Big thing I notice right off the bat is that you should probably put some more Geo into the toilet. Look at how tiny your vase for the plant is in comparison to the toilet and look how many sides around the 2 are. The pot for the plant looks like its about 14 edges around where as the toilet looks like its around 12. Bump it up a little bit to make it feel more round. Also, the way your toilet it bolted to the ground is kinda strange.. Do you have reference of that type of toilet? It seems odd that it acts as if it is some sort of extension to a pipe rather than an oval shape with bolts in the back. (like the one in your reference pic.) Lastly, the thickness of the metal base for the light at the top seems a bit too bulky. I could be wrong, but it might be worth it to maybe half the thickness and see how it looks.

Keep going! Its starting to look pretty neat.. or should I rather say disqusting.. and a place that I hope I never have to be at in real life (:

JGreentheRookie

@chriszuko Thanx, for the critique

The toilet has 16 edges and the pot has the same.

The light is in my (real life bathroom) and that's where I took the reference from

All the reference that I have are literally 4meters away:)

PS: I looked at your Resume an spotted that u listed Unreal Engine twice in the 3D Software section:):)

Cibo

The seams between the tiles looking very big and unnatural. Normally they nearly 0,5cm thick but in your picture it looks like more than 1cm.

The tiles alone are okay but the overall impression with the very dirty underground and the very detailed tile edge gives me a "wrong" impression like bad pixel resolution. Maybe make the underground brighter and cleaner so that the detailed tile edges dont look like texture errors for me.

chriszuko

Thx for finding that error on my resume. Will Correct! (: Add more edges to the toilet!

DWalker

The toilet seems to have a cover but no seat.

JGreentheRookie

@DWalker: That was on purpose

JGreentheRookie

Thanx for all the great critique and compliments

JGreentheRookie

Got a small update

So, I added more edges to the toilet. Can u see the difference ??? :poly122:

I also added a very nasty looking carpet, don't even wanna know what happened their. :poly127: lol

And some nasty toilet paper. Ohh and the bucket is also new.

Should I put a small light source down their to make it more noticable?

JGreentheRookie

small update

I got a question though.

This is my lightmap for the heater in the left-hand Corner and I dont get why, after I build the lighting, the shadows on the object look so crappy.

sushi

Increase your lightmap resolution for more detailed shadows

JGreentheRookie

Thanks for the reply.

I already increased the res. to 256 and it still looks like that :poly127:

JGreentheRookie

So, I Decided to switch to cryengine 3 since some buds an I are working on a bigger project where we r using cryengine 3 and I am also planning on applying at crytek sooner or later.
I will be posting some new shots soon.

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So, I'm almost done with my old_restroom project, I just need to texture the sink and add a few cool decals to the scene

Critique welcome

Darkleopard

Looks pretty good, i like the grime.

I would agree with other people that the wall tiles are distracting.
I also think that the grass and any other moss etc should be scattered around the floor tile gaps, instead of around the sides of the room. It looks a little fake at the moment

JGreentheRookie

Darkleopard wrote: »

Looks pretty good, i like the grime.

I would agree with other people that the wall tiles are distracting.
I also think that the grass and any other moss etc should be scattered around the floor tile gaps, instead of around the sides of the room. It looks a little fake at the moment

Thanx for the reply I'll change the grass locations , it does look kinda fake

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kaikaisushi wrote: »

really nice especially on textures. But i think plant life won't survive from the lack of sunlight, maybe fungi and mushrooms could though.

Thanx

And btw. mushrooms and fungi is a great idea i think it would look even better :poly142:

JGreentheRookie

Added some mushrooms

JGreentheRookie

Calling this one finished.
This is my Final shot I'm gonna do more shots from different angles.