[WIP] Kerrigan

Suba

Hi guys. So i wanted to remake Kerrigan from Starcraft. But slighlty more feminine and sexier. This is the first female i make and i already can guess i gonna have a hard time with the face.

Would be glad to have some feedbacks to improve.

This is what i have for now.

PyrZern

Can we get close-up of the head profile shots ?

Suba

Yeah of course.

anglorum

Her torso armor is awesome, but her forehead seems a little big proportionally. It's kind of like baby-proportions at the moment.

Leinad

Hey Suba, are you working closely off of a reference that has a front, 3/4, and side view? Your sculpting skills are good, but the issues that I see are mainly in the face like you've already pointed out.

Try to focus on nailing the eyes and lips for now and move out from there. I am not sure how much your trying to stylize, but whatever you do, find a female face with the front, 3/4, and side view and follow it extremely closely. Just looking at an image I searched on google you can see some areas that can be improved in the profile view.

From my experience if I don't have all of the 3 main views for reference the model just doesn't look right. Pay special attention to the 3/4 and side view.

Suba

Anglorum thanks, you are right. I wanted to make a cute face but i ended up with something weird haha. I gonna re work that forehead.



Leinad thank you for the feedbacks. Actually no, i have a lot of references of girls faces but i didn't work with pictures of multiple angles from the same girl, and maybe that's my problem yeah. Your picture actually helps me to realize that my girl has weird proportions.
I will try to do what you told me, hope that helps !

Suba

Update: Reworked the face. Detailed pretty much everything. I will do the hair after the posing.

Feedbacks are appreciated !

valuemeal

This most interesting indeed thus far, however she should probably
have a longer torso you know? Also her head should be a tiny bit, tinier.

Suba

Thanks a lot for the feedback valuemeal. I gonna watch out for this.

New update:

skyline5gtr

Body looks great, something bugging me about the face tho

mkZ3R0

I second that. Great work on the body. Anatomy looks good, but take your time polishing the face. It is very important in general, but especially for this character, as her face is the only thing left truly human.

Suba

You are both right, there is something odd about her face but it can't put my finger on it. I gonna spend more time on that.
Thank you.

artstream

Mind putting an updated front view up in a default pose? It will help other people see what could be fixed with the face.

stevston89

Take another look at the proportions overall. The torso looks short/small, the neck looks a bit short, and the feet look gigantic.

Suba

artstream wrote: »

Mind putting an updated front view up in a default pose? It will help other people see what could be fixed with the face.

Yeah good idea
I had the feel that the eyes should be higher, so I changed that, maybe that's less odd.

stevston89 wrote: »

Take another look at the proportions overall. The torso looks short/small, the neck looks a bit short, and the feet look gigantic.

Damn, you are right. I just made those adjustements, i hope it's better:

Jet_Pilot

not a fan of the lips. not sure if you are trying to got for an Angelina thing, cause right now all i keep thinking is she has a cleft palate scar.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Sarah-Kerrigan-HOTS-16-359439308

Suba

Jet_Pilot wrote: »

not a fan of the lips. not sure if you are trying to got for an Angelina thing, cause right now all i keep thinking is she has a cleft palate scar.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Sarah-Kerrigan-HOTS-16-359439308

Yeah that was the idea (the Angelina thing, not the cleft palate scar ). But maybe i should go with smaller lips. Hmm I have to try it out.

Prism

Great work !, the only thing i would take a look at is her bum. I think you can improve the shape there.