Ninja 3D Model

Yilativ

Here I want to share my last work.. It's not good, but its somethink..

I'm just learning.

My deviantART: http://yilativ.deviantart.com/

Veech

I like the way you did the hands.
The torso is decent I'd say maybe a little lumpy and I can't help and feel like the knees are too low on the leg.

Yilativ

Thank you, I will remember this for next time.

Shiniku

Those arms look incredibly long. It's hard to tell with the angles and perspective, but I think the entire upper body is too big for the legs. It looks like his hands would reach down below his knees if he lowered his arms to his sides.

The eyes are looking a bit too cartoonish, the white is much too bright overall. You could sue your UV space more effectively, try straighten out and squaring up some areas so you can back it better.

Overall though, good work, keep at it!

Yilativ

Thank`s, I will try to do it better nex time, I will remember this for my next projects.
Thank's for comment and tips.
Sorry my bad works, just learning. ^^

Yilativ

Ninja 3D Model (click to view in 3D)

Yilativ

Just a little animation I just finished, it no so good, but I'm just learning

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HE9lVIVnn10"]Blender Ninja 3D model + Walk Cycle Animation - YouTube[/ame]

Dimfist

Really good for a beginner. I think if the legs were longer it would work well. That was always my problem when I first started doing life drawings. Now I make a conscious effort to check that.

Yilativ

Dimfist wrote: »

Really good for a beginner. I think if the legs were longer it would work well. That was always my problem when I first started doing life drawings. Now I make a conscious effort to check that.

Thank you for the reply, yes it's true, lot of people says me that I got problems with the proportions, I will work with that