CE3 Scifi Scene. Need crit please for final polish!

noscope

Hay guys!

Im in the process of ending my contract at my current place of work and have decided that I need to radically up my portfolio before I start applying for more in the games industry.

Here's the fruits of my labor but I've hit a wall. This is my first cryengine scene so still learning and I need that last bit of crit so I can spend next week polishing it to a point I am satisfied with. Please help!

Arthus

I know this is space station or ship, but it's too clean for me, so if u want make this a little dirtier.

DougClayton4231

Very nice work! The only thing that I would say is to use the lighting to create a focal point in the scene and use that to create a better sense of staging and depth.

RobeOmega

How long in total did this take you?

LANKUS MAXIMUS

Really nice scene. I like the level of colour variation within your scene. Not something you see very often in sci-fi corridor projects.

I do agree with Doug's comment though. Your lighting could be altered to further strengthen the scene. I find that throwing your image in PS and taking a look at it in black and white can always help determine where lighting values should be adjusted..

All the best!

edit- Would be nice to see a few close-ups of your door and monitors.

noscope

@LANKUS MAXIMUS
@DougClayton4231
awesome cheers ill definitely give the idea of changing it to b&w a go when I get home to help better the lighting and will upload some more shots of the scene.

@Robeomega
Umm its really hard to say as Ive been working on and off like 3 weeks maybe.