Favela test crits

LensFlare

So guys, this is my first time really doing anything like this and now that I have sent it out I was hoping I could have a bit of critique from all of you. This was for an art test with the following requirements:

You must model a Favela house along with a stair on the side and a palm tree (other props are optional).

You are free to use whatever reference you want and choose the structure of Favela you want but here is some below to give you an idea.

You will need to respect the following restrictions :

- You have to model the whole scene in less than 1000 triangles
- Respect the pixel density of 64 pixels per meter
- You can’t use more than two 512 x 512 textures
- You also need to provide us a mid day light map (around 2pm)
- We want the style of the model and texturing to be realistic

This is what I came up with at the end of the day. I ended up at 978 tris:




And here are some wires




Now I would like to polish this up and turn it into a portfolio piece, so comments and critiques welcome!