The DP hair looks nice. You're probably right about it clipping with her collar items. It could also use an ornament or something so it's not just hair.
As for the sword, the design is cool but the detail on the back should probably be edited a bit. The way it branches out at the top and bottom makes it look like the blade is held on pretty weakly to the handle. Also the detail cutting in and out like that would be hard to fit into the budget unless you use an alpha map. I think you can use alpha on any item now but still you should keep that in mind when designing your items.
Thanks for the critique! I agree that the DP hair looks a little barren at the moment, I'll think up some ideas of what to add to give it more flair.
As for the sword I edited the feather-y design and integrated it more with the guard to give it a heightened sense of strength. I changed the silhouette of the feathers as well. I really want to keep as many of the individual feathers as possible, if I simplify the forms too much I run the risk of losing all semblance of a stylized wing. Do you think that alpha maps would allow the design to more or less remain the same? Thanks again!
Are those actual black feathers or metal shaped like feathers? If it's actual feathers then the blade is still completely unbalanced. It's about a .5 unit thickness connecting the entire blade to the handle with feathers holding it on. Even if the feathers are metal I think it'd be a good idea to expand the metal on the blade to attach to the handle rather than having the feathers hold it on.
I used photoshop for doing the designs here, a free alternative to just doing conceptual drawings is GIMP. In dire straits you could even use paint, as long as you get across the visual information you need to get across (though photoshop and gimp are much much easier in that regard haha)
Thanks! I had a weapon for it but a similar staff was just added into the game so I'm trying to finish up my new concept on the staff, I'll post that soonish
As a Chinese dude, I thought this courier would be great for another Chinese event: Mid-Autumn Festival (or Mooncake Festival), because the bunny character reminds me a lot of the story of the Jade Rabbit, who is linked to the moon goddess Chang'e.
The rabbit as a creature of the spring season usually works but probably not in the context of Chinese New Year (unless it's the Year of the Rabbit).
But hey, just my 2 cents. It's a great flying form design, would love to see how it works on ground!
Thanks Bernoully, your accuracy to the culture is much appreciated. I was looking into the cultural significance of rabbits in china and the information I found was relatively scarce. I did take inspiration from the story of the jade rabbit but didn't know it was linked to autumn. What I did find said that the zodiac sign is linked to spring, so even though it will be the year of the horse I feel like the rabbit as arbiter of spring will still land me in the safe zone. Also since the chinese new year is the "lunar new year" I felt the rabbit would fit even more to the theme. Thanks again for the input!
I wanted to explore messing around with Skywrath's weapon. It'd require some tweaking of his animations but nothing drastic (aka he wouldn't become a melee hero). CONTROVERSY WOOO
lol, forget to tell you one extra thing, if you did this in 3 years ago then it will be more nice, year of rabbit, my chinese zodiac year XD
not really sure valve will make event for moon festival or not, if got this will be very nice courier. (folklore of the jade rabbit that live on the moon)
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As for the sword, the design is cool but the detail on the back should probably be edited a bit. The way it branches out at the top and bottom makes it look like the blade is held on pretty weakly to the handle. Also the detail cutting in and out like that would be hard to fit into the budget unless you use an alpha map. I think you can use alpha on any item now but still you should keep that in mind when designing your items.
As for the sword I edited the feather-y design and integrated it more with the guard to give it a heightened sense of strength. I changed the silhouette of the feathers as well. I really want to keep as many of the individual feathers as possible, if I simplify the forms too much I run the risk of losing all semblance of a stylized wing. Do you think that alpha maps would allow the design to more or less remain the same? Thanks again!
Add me please in steam
Prosomogy: I'll send a request right now
I'm pretty new here at polycount.
my workshop link :http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198026621056/myworkshopfiles/
gonna put it in tomorow in the workshop .
I like that skywrath set concept.. I would be interested in it ,if you would develop it further
cheers
bow done , please accept the contribution .
cheers
Here's the concept for the skywrath staff for the courtier of thorns set:
That bow came out really awesome, one of my favorites!
Also, if you need someone to evenutally animate those trent's I'd be very interested! I love that design!
My Treants have finally been completed, I'd love it if you could show your support for them by voting by clicking the link below, cheers!
Mihal and I will be collabing on an LC blade for the Spring 2014 event, here's the concept:
The rabbit as a creature of the spring season usually works but probably not in the context of Chinese New Year (unless it's the Year of the Rabbit).
But hey, just my 2 cents. It's a great flying form design, would love to see how it works on ground!
Valve GIVE SKYWRATH PLUSH つ ◕_◕ ༽つ
looool I was taking screenshots for the courier hayes and I are doing, this is a sneak peak.
lol, forget to tell you one extra thing, if you did this in 3 years ago then it will be more nice, year of rabbit, my chinese zodiac year XD
not really sure valve will make event for moon festival or not, if got this will be very nice courier. (folklore of the jade rabbit that live on the moon)
anyway this is a nice courier