Sci Fi Second try!

oxblood

Hi people. The last Sci fi piece i made i wasn't happyy with at all, but i havnt given up. i just started something completely new. So far i have just blocked things out and i'm starting to add bits of detail. Feedback would be much appreciated.

oxblood

bump?

Vailias

Like you said, you've blocked things out and are starting to add detail.
You have a corridor with some railings.

There's really not a lot to crit yet, especially as you've indicated you're in the very early stages of this.

Keep working on it.

oxblood

thanks vallias, I'll keep at it

oxblood

litte update. Any feedback?

ayoub44

i can't see the image of your last update

oxblood

@ayoub44 i must have forgot to tag it before i left out >:( anyway im back now so here it is

Inkalicious

are you basing this off a concept or just an idea that you have? there really isn't much to critique.

oxblood

@Inkalicious Ive got quite a few concepts that im taking bits to make it my own. I havn't been able to get to my computer for a couple days but anyway heres a couple panels i have started texturing.

oxblood

bump

WarrenM

You keep bumping but it's unclear what kind of crits you're after. There's really not enough there ... Yep, those look like panels. Keep going.

oxblood

@warrenm I was just looking for tips if theres anything that could be imporved really thats all i guess. They are far from perfect... but i guess ill keep going, the next update will be a big one. then i can get some more crit hopefully :poly121:

SirSpangles

This is supposed to be a scifi scene, so where is the science fiction? all you have are walls and panels. There is no interesting models i.e. gadgets, robotic elements, interesting devices etc. Build your image library, find some strong concepts to follow cause this just isnt cutting it.

Keep working at it and find some cool things to model and implement into your scene.

oxblood

Ok @Sirspangles I'll start putting sone assets together, thats what I needed to hear
Thanks

oxblood

quick update, gona fill out the scene with some other assets next

oxblood

another update. just working on the door and some crates atm