monster

nelson_press

yes i know, unrelated title sorry

i get the feeling poly count is better suited for doing game related work

anyways usual feedback is appreciated

Brian "Panda" Choi

I feel like lay in the values first so we kind of get a better understanding of the lighting you're planning for. See if you can do thumbnails of several lighting schemes.

nelson_press

ive been told that the cropping is very bad, how should i adjust the cropping or the composition of the image?

nelson_press

need to find time to do that lighting thing ...
ill get to it i swear



in the mean time does this make any sense?

i was told that the form and proportions were a bit off

Brian "Panda" Choi

It's good that you're constructing the forms.

What IS this supposed to be?

nelson_press

uh, yes, it's a panel for a comic or something like that

usually when i do stuff i do at ratio 8.5x11 or something like that






sorry, im not certain if this makes any sense
sorry updates are so long apart but you know, life and surviving and what not

nelson_press

nelson_press

nelson_press

gotta get the lights and shadows working right ... aw farts im rusty T_T