my first low poly model. Pontiac Bonneville

alfbadi

Hi, this is my first low poly model. It´s a pontiac Bnonneville.
Please feel free to give me critiques, opinions and tips.

thanks a lot!

AGarton

Looks great! Could we see a wireframe?

theSixtyEight

Very nice! loving Bonnevilles, especialyl '67

DWalker

There seems to be some odd pinching near the hood/headlight border. The hood also has an odd seam near the middle, leading to the front corners of the hood.

The taillights are a bit plain, especially when compared with the detail in the headlights. In a '55, they should appear something like this:


The front wheel well is too angular, especially compared to the number of sides on the tires and even the small details such as the lights and the mirrors.

Finally, do you have a polycount?

silkroadgame

Very clean model,but the reflection needs more updates.

Shrike

Try rendering with Image Based Lighting / HDRI , marmoset or all common 3d Packages support that , its essential for cars , just gives great reflections , looks like you use marmoset

aside looks pretty nice

Id recommend a background in complementary color, but analogous like you have works aswell

alfbadi

Hi!
sorry about my delay.
Im fix some of the issues you told me.
there is my update:









Thanks a lot for your feedback!

Javibcln

This is looking great! Could you please post some maps? Keep doing it like this man.

alfbadi

Javibcln wrote: »

This is looking great! Could you please post some maps? Keep doing it like this man.

Of course!, there are all the maps:



thanks a lot for your support

alfbadi

Javibcln wrote: »

This is looking great! Could you please post some maps? Keep doing it like this man.

jaja, tambn puedes hablarme en espa

Javibcln

jajaja debuti tio! me mola mucho el coche en serio, cuando acabe el escenario que estoy haciendo me voy a modelar uno asi en baja tambien a ver que tal se da y eso...

Steppenwolf

Very nice model for first try! I take it you are not completely new to modeling and texturing?

Where you can improve a lot is unwrapping. There is so much unused space wasted on your maps.

alfbadi

Steppenwolf wrote: »

Very nice model for first try! I take it you are not completely new to modeling and texturing?

Where you can improve a lot is unwrapping. There is so much unused space wasted on your maps.

Thanks!
No, this is not my first model, is my first model for video games.
I never done before, this kind of workflow. And i still do not understand why I appear artifacts in -X in the normal map and the occlusion map.

I working as a motion grapher designer, but it has nothing to do with it, is more complex to do this kind of work for video games and i love it!
I really want to work as a environment artist for videogames.

Benjam

I like it, the texture you have used has a nice faded look to it.

I am curious to know exactly how low-poly that is because from the wire frame it does not look all that low poly, the headlights for instance are quite high, the wing mirrors are also quite high.

But all in all great job!!

alfbadi

Benjam wrote: »

I like it, the texture you have used has a nice faded look to it.

I am curious to know exactly how low-poly that is because from the wire frame it does not look all that low poly, the headlights for instance are quite high, the wing mirrors are also quite high.

But all in all great job!!

i Know, it´s not super low poly or low poly in a uniform way. I need to improve my skills. The next one will be better.