Sci-fi Hallway Speed exercise

JoshVanZuylen

Hey guys, I was board yesterday arvo so I decided to wip something up!

Done in about an hour this is what I ended up with.

Please critique!!!!!!!!!!!





This is the first proper time I have used Parallaxed normals in a tight time frame. (or really at all) So if anyone has any suggestions.

J0NNYquid

You did this in an hour? Well, once I got over my jealousy, I realized this was a really good piece. Nice material definition. The hexagons on the floor/ceiling look a bit big/blurry to me, otherwise this is really well done, especially for an hour of work. Only other thing I'd say is maybe tone down that bright bluish/purple light on the left just a bit, desaturate it a bit.

JoshVanZuylen

Thanks JONNYquid, I'm planing on revisiting this in the future, and when I do, I shall look into the issues and suggestions you have brought to light
I Felt the same about the floor. the normal didn't come though enough

leleuxart

For an hour I'd say this is really good, but the effects are too strong and hiding everything. :poly124:

Also, this may be a personal preference, but the presentation image is way too cluttered. A wireframe, closeups, and texture sheet is too much to focus on and they deserve more space. The wireframe and and texturesheet could be their own images and the close-ups could be on a single sheet, probably with mesh closeups in Marmoset or something.

JoshVanZuylen

Thanks mate! Wen I go back to it. I will keep this is mind.

I blew the volume lights and post work out because the scene just this hallway, so at the end it's just black and it looked so bad so I had to cap it off I guess.

FuzzYspo0N

Nice speed work!

Meteora

This only confirms that I'm a slow ass modeller. Props to you my friend, I think it looks amazing for an hour's worth of work. I need to learn how to speed up.

Amsterdam Hilton Hotel

would you prefer your work to be impressive, or to be impressive [for an hour]?

Kuki

Man! You need a huge screwdriver to open that thing...

just kidding, nice one! impressive as one hour task...

JoshVanZuylen

@Meteora, I spend hardly any time modeling. I spend most of my time texturing... ( no high polys here)

@Amsterdam Hilton Hotel, your completely right that's why I'm asking people's opinions so I can attack it later

I have a few ideas already which will be cool. I'm going to try and make the file scene with only 3 materials.