Sci-fi Hallway Speed exercise

JoshVanZuylen

Hey guys, I was board yesterday arvo so I decided to wip something up!

Done in about an hour this is what I ended up with.

Please critique!!!!!!!!!!!





This is the first proper time I have used Parallaxed normals in a tight time frame. (or really at all) So if anyone has any suggestions.

J0NNYquid

You did this in an hour? Well, once I got over my jealousy, I realized this was a really good piece. Nice material definition. The hexagons on the floor/ceiling look a bit big/blurry to me, otherwise this is really well done, especially for an hour of work. Only other thing I'd say is maybe tone down that bright bluish/purple light on the left just a bit, desaturate it a bit.

JoshVanZuylen

Thanks JONNYquid, I'm planing on revisiting this in the future, and when I do, I shall look into the issues and suggestions you have brought to light
I Felt the same about the floor. the normal didn't come though enough

Nerf Bat Ninja

I'd recommend slowing down, paying attention to details, and really spending enough time to make a nice polished portfolio piece.

leleuxart

For an hour I'd say this is really good, but the effects are too strong and hiding everything. :poly124:

Also, this may be a personal preference, but the presentation image is way too cluttered. A wireframe, closeups, and texture sheet is too much to focus on and they deserve more space. The wireframe and and texturesheet could be their own images and the close-ups could be on a single sheet, probably with mesh closeups in Marmoset or something.

JoshVanZuylen

Thanks mate! Wen I go back to it. I will keep this is mind.

I blew the volume lights and post work out because the scene just this hallway, so at the end it's just black and it looked so bad so I had to cap it off I guess.

FuzzYspo0N

Nice speed work!

Meteora

This only confirms that I'm a slow ass modeller. Props to you my friend, I think it looks amazing for an hour's worth of work. I need to learn how to speed up.

Amsterdam Hilton Hotel

would you prefer your work to be impressive, or to be impressive [for an hour]?

Kuki

Man! You need a huge screwdriver to open that thing...

just kidding, nice one! impressive as one hour task...

JoshVanZuylen

@Meteora, I spend hardly any time modeling. I spend most of my time texturing... ( no high polys here)

@Amsterdam Hilton Hotel, your completely right that's why I'm asking people's opinions so I can attack it later

I have a few ideas already which will be cool. I'm going to try and make the file scene with only 3 materials.