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WIP: Apc Vehicle ...Critiques appreciated

BI0PREDAT0R
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Hey PC! just working on a new project still in the early stages just blocking out the vehicle with some areas a little bit fleshed out. Its off a concept of the APC in the game inversion I just loved the style of it but I'm making it my own. looking to do a different turret on the top and side gun. Also I made the tires larger and made the APC wider. Looking for any critiques or suggestion as I'm still in the early stages maybe you guys can spot something I over looked and any suggestion for the gun turret and the cannon on top.

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  • BI0PREDAT0R
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    BI0PREDAT0R polycounter lvl 5
    Just a quick progress post, Added more meshes and raised the vehicle up alittle. Any suggestion would be helpful :).


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    apc ready waiting for passengers
  • Muzzoid
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    Muzzoid polycounter lvl 10
    Pretty cool.

    Kinda an abstract criticism, but i feel that the model is missing a lot of the Flow of the concept. Where shapes sweep into each other it feels blocky in the model. Maybe see if you can try and capture more of that magic in the model?
  • BI0PREDAT0R
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    BI0PREDAT0R polycounter lvl 5
    Thanks Muzz I kinda feel that aswell with my concept ill play around and see what i can come up with, maybe more meshes or something
  • BI0PREDAT0R
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    BI0PREDAT0R polycounter lvl 5
    Hey Guys just looking for some critiques, and what you think so far. I'm about to move on to the high poly soon just need to add some small additions, but hoping another pair of eyes can see any ideas and mistakes.

    Muzz: thanks man for the critique I got what you were saying hopefully this versions shows alittle more flow.

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    Also if anyone has suggestions on the suspension system, I can't seem to figure out how they would connect to the body of the Apc. The drive system seems to be within the wheel wells, but the mechanics of turning seems complicated I have some reference on ATV suspensions that i feel would work, but if anyone knows of something in similar design in real world I would love to know :)
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