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Can you give me some feedback please?

Hello! I was working in this little guy, basing myself on Disney's exercise of giving some personality to a sack (pillow like), so if you could give me some feedback I would really appreciate it! Done in Zbrush, final comp in PS.
Thanks!

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  • Shrike
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    Shrike interpolator
    Looks good to me, good that its not instantly obvious cg
    That inner glow is too harsh, i would paint that manually
    Also try out a cold background, you have 70% covered with warm colors already , and the eyepatch blue dosnt really find any color relation else
    The rope looks silver, i would fix that aswell
  • DWalker
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    The sack material is inconsistent - it's rough and textured in some places, but smooth in others.

    I think the eye would work better as an actual button (including threads).

    The material around the scar looks folded rather than cut. Sharper edges, a few loose threads, perhaps even a bit of stuffing peeking out would really help to sell it. You can also elongate and darken the holes around the stitches, possibly adding creases in the normal map to indicate the tension.

    A simpler, black, triangular eye patch might work better.
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