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Esselle
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Esselle polycounter lvl 10
Hi all, i'm a noob who wants to make a character. That's my first attempt ever in making human body (i only made an ass lol, and some alien faces supposed to be human).
I thought probably i don't have to make a detailed anatomy model for my first try (lazy power yup) since i will cover the body with an armor, and no need to do a face, since i want to get an assassin-looking chara and i will cover the face with a mask, or a pursuance of the armor, maybe with only the eyes coming out. I don't have a concept yet, but i will make one soon as possible.

Anyway, this is the base model i made:
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  • The_Pixel
    Hi! That didn't turn out bad for your first character model, but in regards to not having the head on the model, I would advise you to make one anyway for practice, also to make it seem more believable to have proper proportions and form, it would be much harder to try and model a mask that looks like it's sitting on top of a head below without actually having a head there.
    But that's just my opinion maybe some other people might have some different advice for you too.
    Also might be me or just the camera angle but midsection looks very flat
  • Esselle
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    Esselle polycounter lvl 10
    Thank you for the reply!
    Sure, i mean not doing ears, mouth, nostrils, etc.. i will model the base shape of the head, something like this with a nose, when i will manage to do it =|
    2wcofmp.png

    Anyway, i adjusted the mid section, now better?
    34nifwj.png
  • Esselle
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    Esselle polycounter lvl 10
    Ok, i made a concept, poor of details i know, but i will add them directly when modelling the high poly.

    The red/black is a plastic fabric
    The white is an hard metal-ish material
    The exagons are a plastic fabric similar to carbon fiber

    9k7cba.jpg
  • Esselle
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    Esselle polycounter lvl 10
    I made some progress
    e5ielv.png
  • Esselle
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    Esselle polycounter lvl 10
    I don't have so much time cause my school exams, but i still worked a bit on this
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