The Falen Museum

jsargent

Hi! I have just finished my escape entry and would love some feedback. Thanks!

http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117603



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Shrike

looks great

Just dont really get where the escape thing is built into

jsargent

It is people escaping a blizzard inside the ruins of the museum.

pixelpatron

"Fallen"

I'd also lessen the intensity of your snow flurries. Not sure I'm getting an "Escape" vibe from the scene. What is the story I'm supposed to be picking up on here?

pixelpatron

Forgive the crudeness but you get the point.

jsargent

I'm not sure I do, an escape can be shown in many ways. It was meant to be about people escaping the blizzard and remain a beautiful scene. I don't think you have to shove robots and things in a scene to make it interesting.

JoshuaMorrisonInk

I understand what you where going for jsargent and I agree escape doesn't have to have individuals literally running from something. However add some survives and emphasizing their struggle in the blizzard might help sell it.