My First Blaster

XI47

Hi, first-time poster here.
Here's a little thing I've been working on, not quite sure what to call it but...
Anyway, thoughts?

XI47

Bump. Is it that bad? XD

KnechtRuprecht

It's not bad, but try to give the background an other colour than the gun. Otherwise details are very hard to see.
I like the design, especially the handle. The area under the scope thing looks a bit weird though. Try to add some details here. It seems that on the trigger is some kind of smoothing error.
Your edges are too sharp for a clean bake. Try to loosen them quite a notch. ( look at this pic )

Dagon

It's not bad for a first blaster it's pretty good. But as the person above said the edges are too sharp. a wireframe and a darker background render would be nice.

XI47

Thanks for the advice guys, working on loosening the enforcing edges now. Does anyone know of a tutorial or resource I can look at for optimal edge spacing?

More pics to come, any and all advice and critique welcome

Lazerus Reborn

Some general things about PC to get good critiques/

Work on fixing all critics before posting again and you'll get more responses etc. (Otherwise it's all talk)

Use a image hosting site such as Imgur so people can see it better.

Only bump with more progress (probably the most important aha)

Not trying to be a dick, its just so you're not disheartened by lack of posts

XI47

Wireframe as requested. Sorry if it's a bit bright, they render at the levels i set them but save out much brighter...don't know why.

XI47

Lazerus Reborn wrote: »

Some general things about PC to get good critiques/

Work on fixing all critics before posting again and you'll get more responses etc. (Otherwise it's all talk)

Use a image hosting site such as Imgur so people can see it better.

Only bump with more progress (probably the most important aha)

Not trying to be a dick, its just so you're not disheartened by lack of posts

Will keep all that in mind, thanks