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[UDK] Small industrial sci-fi scene

Hello everyone. Lately i've been working on this small industrial/sci-fi scene put together in UDK. I think most of it is done, but I might add some subtle smoke particles and lens flares. Anyway what do you guys think of this? Harsh critique appreciated :)

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More of this on my cghub page: http://lech-kopec.cghub.com/

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  • minorthreat
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    minorthreat polycounter lvl 7
    Looks awesome so far. I think the plastic curtains look really liquidy or gelatinous though. I also think the floors could use some decals and maybe some junk to appear grungy and dirtier. I'm also curious what's going on behind that wall of fog, especially behind the plastic curtain room. I feel like something more could be added to the background. Otherwise, it looks pretty good.
  • haba_haba
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    Hi minorthreat. Thanks for your suggestions, floor definitely could use some more work, and curtains looks strange to me too after you pointed that out.
    Behind wall of fog is empty space one side, on other some very simple buildings.
    I'll post some updates in couple of days.
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