"Little Italy" restaraunt 3D Environment

Joker_47

Hello fellas ! I decided to make modular building and thought what restaraunt "Puglia", based in New-York, will be the good choise (because it's have simple forms and etc). For now i have made windows, later i will make windows for the side building and make roof for both of them, and finally will make entrance.

original


my work


Tell me what you like, what you didn't like, and if i done something wrong, please help

Have a nice day ! :poly124:

switz

Very cool! Once you plug this into the engine of your choice, dont forget to make an env shader for the window-reflections.

LANKUS MAXIMUS

Cool building. Nice modular work. No crit's from me.

Looking good so far

ToffeeApple

I really like the windows - some great detail there. What stands out for me is that the green is very strong - a more desaturated green would match the reference a bit better.

BARDLER

How did you set up your textures and materials? Do you have unique textures for all the colors? You could save a lot of resources by using a masking and coloring material instance, if you didn't do that already.

DWalker

The green doesn't seem to match the reference. The hue is a bit off (the reference seems to be closer to blue than yours) and the saturation is very different - the reference has a very low saturation. I'm assuming the extreme weathering on that section in particular will occur much later in the development - I'm just referring to the overall color.

The curve of the arches above the windows seems more subtle in the reference.

Joker_47

Thanks for feedback everybody ! Yeah i also noticed there too saturated green color, it's because i actualy didn't pay to much attention to texture, i made it for better visualization, i think i'll make proper texture when i finish modeling.

How did you set up your textures and materials? Do you have unique textures for all the colors?

Thanks for advice, for now it's unique texture for all pieces, i really should have used masks.

The curve of the arches above the windows seems more subtle in the reference.

Perhaps, i'll try to make them more subtle, and see what i will get.

So here is little update, without textures because i plan to work on it at the end.



I think i'll change roof a little, because for now it's not too modular for me.

Joker_47

Another update :



(looks like image have bad resolution :poly136:)

I guess my next update will be final.

Shogun3d

Nice breakdown, looking good so far.

Are you planning to import these into an engine? You could further reduce poly's and reduce unwanted seams/clipping by stapling some of those verts to the corners of your modular windows. They'll snap alot easier.

Joker_47

Shogun3d wrote: »

Nice breakdown, looking good so far.

Are you planning to import these into an engine? You could further reduce poly's and reduce unwanted seams/clipping by stapling some of those verts to the corners of your modular windows. They'll snap alot easier.

Yes i plan to take it into the CryEngine, right now, leading by your advice, i reducing number of polys, update coming soon.

Joker_47

Finaly done.... i hope





I decided to use UDK, instead of CryEngine, because there i have a little experience working with it.


Later i'll try to upload pictures with better resolution, and with wire if necessary.

TonyNowak

Your not done. Try making the grooves and whatnot in the bricks come out more, from a distance, even that distance, it almost looks like just a sheet of white, orange, etc. You have to look hard to find the texture. Try tweaking the lighting a bit, it's way over saturated. The window reflections are also very low res and maybe the molding in the windows, etc. should be a different color. Try reworking the potted plant as well, it doesn't feel or look right with everything else.

Boozebeard

It's too clean.

Bruno Afonseca

It's a pretty good start, you can take it further! Would be a waste to just stop now.
Also, I won't consider it done until I see a greentooth on it

Joker_47

Ok i'll improve this, can't say when, but i will, and what most important, there will be greentooth )

minorthreat

wow lookin' great! I think the potted plants could be improved, and it's kinda hard to tell what's going on with the sidewalk imo, is it a green carpet or fake grass? And what's the black square thing next to the first plant?