Dwarven Homes

PaulH

Hello all, it's not really finished by any stretch of the imagination, but with my dissertation hand in just round the corner, I had to wrap it up.

I'm aware of some pretty glaring issues in the scene but feel free to crit, shred or comment. I can always put the feedback to use for my next project.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gYSaCqQpqU"]Dwarven Homes - YouTube[/ame]

Fenyce

Wow, I love that stone ground! Everything just looks great! BUT the flag is jumping up and down in a kinda strange way while the wind it's dancing in the wind... that feels a little strange to me.

PaulH

ACH I know, they WERE working fine so I don't know why they got their ragga step on

Shrike

Looks fantastic, (except the flag movement) and the layer style for your text
Do not use that bevel and emboss, make the text white and itll be a lot better. Also respect the spacing of your text. On the first frame, the space between the line and the dwarven home text is really off.

KristaW

I love the interior! Really rich and great material definition. The initial camera moves in the interior, when it goes from the table to the bench, could be smoother and pulled back a bit and the stripes happening in the snow, near the opening, are kind of weird IMO. Otherwise it's looking pretty sweet!