Quick Gang...Everybody to the...........Misery......machine?

duncan

Hey everyone.

Decided to make a vehicle since it has been years since I did one of those things I just said.

: : LATSET UPDATE : :

calling it FINISH!

I am sick of looking and thinking about it. Thanks for all of the helpful suggestions everyone......I hope it looks a bit better now.



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duncan

Hey everyone.

Started this yesterday. Just getting an idea of colours before I start adding details.



more soon.

duncan

More



Still plenty to go.

Justin Meisse

Hey man, you've got a tangent with the E in Misery and the H in Machine making it look like "MACAINE"

otherwise I like how it's going, I want to see it hopping over a hill

dpadam450

I can't see any reason to have the wheels that low poly. You add about 10 more triangle slices per wheel and it looks much better.

Dubzski

I reckon that would look freakin hilarious to see animated with those wheels. Maybe with some stretch and squash onto the van body itself.
Ka dunk, ka dunk, ka dunk, heh heh.

ZacD

Don't change the wheels. [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bC_YfqUoL_4"]awesome square wheels on a truck - YouTube[/ame]

ScudzAlmighty

If this doesn't lead to some Emo/Goth Scooby-doo hijinks I'm going to be seriously vexed.

duncan

hahah thanks everyone.

Still going with this. Almost done with the texture.....ALMOST!. Just playing around with some ideas. Gotta finish it off soon coz I am getting over it.



Thanks again everyone :thumbup:

pior

Absolutely loving the motion-blurred road ! Very smart

duncan

haha thanks.

.............You know what they say.............

"There's no hacks like cheap hacks"



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duncan

Decided to call it...... FINISH!

Let me know if it is too too too dark.

Thanks everyone



Now for something new...... unless I need to brighten up this thing first......... then that thing I said. Thanks for the comments and crits everyone.

Autocon

Loving this Duncan, but I prefer the previous incarnation of the Misery Machine too this one. Its those weird dark lines all over everything, they dont seem to fit and stand out a bit too much. Maybe if there toned down? Idk right now they seem to take away from the look of it.

But I guess you could take it as evil is courputing/grabbing the van.

Also you cant really see the awesome little motion blurred road bit anymore, I really liked that before, was a nice touch.

ScudzAlmighty

I assumed those dark lines were supposed to be tree shadows from driving through an evil forest, just painted on instead of cast from a light source.

Looks pretty sweet to me Duncan, a little dark on my pc but just fine on my iPhone. Calibration, grrrr.

duncan

Thanks guys

Yeah the dark lines are supposed to be tree shadows.... maybe they don't work so much.....but I am not sure I want to take them out.... hmmmm

Norron

I think I agree with Autocon. It's sweet but the layout's a lot busier now and there's a lot of extra noise in the texture. I really miss some of the color too, it's pretty monotone now.

ILLMATICC

This is pretty damn sweeet Duncan.
The tree branch shadow idea is super cool, but i do agree that it is a bit hard to figure out at first glance. In the main pic in the layout (top left corner) all you can really see of the 'tree shadows' is the two thick lines running up around the door, and it kinda looks like they're some kind of weird vein things. Maybe if you squeezed in a bit more branch variation around that area it would be easier to make out? Seeing as that is kind of the focal point of that particular image.

Besides that, i think you should make that super sick motion blurred road more visible man!

Jonas Ronnegard

really nice

but yeah go back to a more clean background, don't want your sweet work to be overlooked because of a busy background.

awesome welles

This is awesome man do what you will with the tree shadows they read pretty well on my monitor but not so well on the old tab-let

duncan

calling it FINISH!

I am sick of looking and thinking about it. Thanks for all of the helpful suggestions everyone......I hope it looks a bit better now.



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