Uncharted Room Interior

Managaia

First post on Polycount, doing an uncharted room interior for a school project.

Working from:


this is what i have so far:




Any critique would be awesome. Sorry for the lame wireframe

Thanks Managaia

Clos323

well i know this is at an early stage but since this is the only thing you posted i shall crit this. You're of to a good start. You got your main shapes in but you need to study your source a little more..it seems a little hurried and its that attention to detail that will make everything come together. some of the proportions are off..and some object have to many edges unless you are in the mist of making some high poly models. but look at image below to see what im talking about.

Managaia

Clos323 wrote: »

well i know this is at an early stage but since this is the only thing you posted i shall crit this. You're of to a good start. You got your main shapes in but you need to study your source a little more..it seems a little hurried and its that attention to detail that will make everything come together. some of the proportions are off..and some object have to many edges unless you are in the mist of making some high poly models. but look at image below to see what im talking about.

Took the Crit, thanks for pointing out the table was too big.

Went ahead and made it smaller, added roof detail for later to add some god rays perhaps.



Also thanks for the paint over Clos

death5114

Looking good so far! I don't know if its the certain view, but it seems like the right windows and wall are a bit closed in. Cant wait to see how it turns out!

psychoface665

im not sure if its the perspective or not, but your version seems abit bigger and spaced out in alot of areas

Managaia

New wips should be updating more often everything is pretty much finished modeling now to start the dreaded task of texturing!
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Also started a second project earlier this week


Concept:




As always C&C welcome

Thanks Managaia

Managaia

Quick up date:

Started working with some lights to take a break from texturing.