For your first model this isn't that bad. The texturing is pretty cool though things like his right nipple being out of place stand out to me. Otherwise the texturing isn't really bad.
The main thing you need to work on is anatomy and modelling. Probably the process of it all. *Shrugs*
The way the traps ride up the neck is off; also look at the way the humerus (bone the bicep's on) would connect to the scapula. It looks low to me.
The hands look a little small as well.
I could be wrong on these things, so you should check these things again your reference or someone else.
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For your first model this isn't that bad. The texturing is pretty cool though things like his right nipple being out of place stand out to me. Otherwise the texturing isn't really bad.
The main thing you need to work on is anatomy and modelling. Probably the process of it all. *Shrugs*
The way the traps ride up the neck is off; also look at the way the humerus (bone the bicep's on) would connect to the scapula. It looks low to me.
The hands look a little small as well.
I could be wrong on these things, so you should check these things again your reference or someone else.