Sure you can post this here and to be fair your comprehension of perspective isn't that bad! Most of the information are readable, the only parts you should detail a bit more are the one under the TV, the cupboard right next to it and that thing with the red thingy on it behind the upper couch.
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So many different wwebsites and webforums for posting stuff like this
Im getting lost and confused T_T
perhaps i should have spent more time on line art and perspectives and stuff