Overgrown Scene in UDK (WIP)

Sheers

I'm making this scene from a concept art I found online. I'm looking for advice for things that can be improved and have it look more interesting.

EDIT: The original concept was done by Ben Procter. This image was grabbed off of Jake Virginia's website. Thanks for letting me know!

Here's the original image:


Here's the scene in UDK so far:







Thanks!

Holland

It's a good start! I think your scene is a little wider than the concept and it loses it's impact. It's very noticeable at the top of the concrete blocks. Before you go any further with texturing and lighting i'd make sure your geometry matches the concept in scale.

VESIUS

Some things such as the barriers and bottom of the walls are too short, and the hall seems a little wide. Besides this, it's a good start.

SpeedyB

The "floor" in the concept looks to be water, judging by the ripples around where the hose contacts it.

Sheers

I didn't notice the ripples there at first. Thanks for pointing that out. Here's some more work I got done this past weekend.





Underneath the bottom of the large pipe I had the ground lowered for water.