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ArenaNet Art Test - Female Norn

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Hey all! I know I'm crazy late to this but I wanted to give Hyojin's awesome concept a whirl, even if I don't finish in time for ArenaNet's deadline, I'd still like to finish it. And I'm jobless this time around, so I can't use that as an excuse to put it off! :poly136:

This is what I have for the anatomy thus far- many thanks for looking and any critiques.
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  • sofabound
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    sofabound polycounter lvl 9
    Update! Chipping away at this poly by poly and working my way from the bottom up.
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  • sofabound
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    sofabound polycounter lvl 9
    Hey guys, I worked on this a bit more over the weekend and got a little more done- I think the biggest parts I still have to do are the skirt, weapon, hair, and fur, then the other smaller pieces.

    The size of her face was bothering me a little, so I took in her cheeks and changed the shape of her head to give it better structure, and thinned her nose. I've been staring at this for days on end though, so let me know what you think!


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  • GenericGoodGuy
    Looks a lot better to me looks less alien, I can't help much more than that because I'm a beginner-kind of. I can't wait to see more.
  • sofabound
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    sofabound polycounter lvl 9
    GenericGoodGuy Any feedback helps! At least I know I'm going in the right direction. Thanks!

    All right, ya'll. I definitely missed the deadline but I'm gonna keep it going since there are quite a few things on this character I haven't done before, like the hair/fur and such. I'm having too much fun trying to get the armor right, anyway, so I don't want to rush it and flub those things up. If nothing else, this will be a pretty great learning experience, and hopefully a decent portfolio piece.

    Still to do: Hair, hair braids, fur, weapon, gloves, front skirt.

    Here's my current progress, almost done with the hi-poly:

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  • sofabound
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    sofabound polycounter lvl 9
    My monitor was kaput for a little while and I got it temp fixed, but I'm pretty sure I'll need to buy a replacement soon...

    Here's the current WIP; I sculpted in folds for the cloth and leather, and modeled a placeholder for the hair until I'm ready to texture. I think it needs more volume on the right side, but I'm figuring it out as I go. I also took a short break from her to model the weapon.

    Next up is the fur and other face detail like the lips, then I want to start texturing by midweek.
    Any crits would be much appreciated. :)

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