I'm not certain what the animation is doing that couldn't be accomplished with still images. In general, only animators and VFX artists really benefit from a reel. If you are going to use a video, things should actually move; try a walk-thru (or fly thru) rather than hard cuts.
The transition between the room and the outdoor scene takes far too long - use a title card if you want to emphasize the transition.
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The transition between the room and the outdoor scene takes far too long - use a title card if you want to emphasize the transition.