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India Eisley (WIP) Critiques needed.

YeaginsD
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YeaginsD polycounter lvl 11
Hello Polycount Community,
I'm new here and I really loved the work I've seen on the site, it's a really amazing site. I thought I would be ever so grateful to use the knowledge of such talented artist. So, I've been working on an India Eisley sculpt and wanted to know what professional advice I could get before I moved on to fine details. I'm using zbrush and I put a base polypaint and hair to get a better feel for it. These are my current updates as of now.
indiaupdate2.png

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  • DWalker
    Are you working from a particular reference? Her face seems to change depending on her age.

    The only glaring problem I can see so far are her eyebrows - they are far to high above the eye ridges, and both begin and end too far from the center of the face.

    Her cheeks also appear a bit more prominent, although this might be caused by lighting or differences between what I think you are going for and your actual reference (hint, hint...).
    IndiaEisley15_6.jpg

    The placement of the hairline also seems off, and the plasticine appearance of the hair is bugging me, probably more than it should.
  • YeaginsD
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    YeaginsD polycounter lvl 11
    Ok, thanks for the input. I'll work on some changes and post the results.
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