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[WIP]Barrett XM109 20MM

The very first thing I ever properly modeled was a Barrett XM109 rifle. That was one year ago, so just as a personal thing, and a benchmark for my progress, I've decided to re-do the model. I'm not going to bake/make a low-poly, but I will texture it.

Starting on the scope first, I don't have a polygon limit, so I went a bit overboard. With the completed scope I'm on roughly 322k triangles, then again the scope is the most detailed part of the weapon.
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Sorry for including the render of the screw, I just invested so much damn time in figuring out how to model it I just had to. More to come.

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  • DWalker
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    The screw seems to be formed from a coiled cylinder rather than an actual thread. The thread profile should be similar to one of these:
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    producing a result like:
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    Finally, are you certain the screws should be tapered? That's more typical of screws used to bite into soft materials like wood than for connecting two pieces of steel.
  • RathSkeller
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    I guess they logically shouldn't be tapered, and should have sharper angles, and I could change them if they made a big difference, but I think the tapered end reads better in silhouette, and in general. I'm modelling the weapon, but it's a slightly stylised/exaggerated version. Or at least that's my awful excuse for inaccuracies.

    Also, picatinny mount for the scope modeled. I think the lens of the scope looks a lot better with something to reflect, I can't wait to see it in a proper environment.

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  • XeroS371
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    Hi,

    i like ur scope. Its some kind of heavy and bulky, especially the front part, but its a nice start. Hope u will post some updates :)

    I would suggest u change the screw. U createt a whithworth-screw, but it is only for pipes. Additionaly a whithworth-screw is a bit conical. Normally u combine the parts with a sellers-screw, cause it is cheaper and more practical. Just technical details, but maybe u can make use of it.
    Last but not least, u used the screw to combine some parts of the scope. The bolts arent enough to fix them together, u need some nuts to get enough pressure.

    Pls excuse my bad english :)
  • RathSkeller
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    XeroS371 wrote: »
    Hi,

    i like ur scope. Its some kind of heavy and bulky, especially the front part, but its a nice start. Hope u will post some updates :)

    I would suggest u change the screw. U createt a whithworth-screw, but it is only for pipes. Additionaly a whithworth-screw is a bit conical. Normally u combine the parts with a sellers-screw, cause it is cheaper and more practical. Just technical details, but maybe u can make use of it.
    Last but not least, u used the screw to combine some parts of the scope. The bolts arent enough to fix them together, u need some nuts to get enough pressure.

    Pls excuse my bad english :)


    Well, seeing as the only CC I've gotten is about the screws, I figured I'd change them, just to see if they look better. And damn I'm glad I did, this looks a whole heap better than the previous screws. Is this a lot closer to an appropriate screw? I'll be putting a nut on each screw now-ish.
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    As for actual progress of modelling, today I modelled out the receiver, and I have to say I'm really digging how it's coming along.

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  • DWalker
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    Not an easy weapon to model - decent reference shots are limited. The best shot I could find of a Barret (M82, I believe) shows a standard Picatinny rail, although others seem to feature slightly different versions:
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    Thus, the profile should conform to this:
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  • RathSkeller
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    LOTS of progress done today! I'd like to say I finished the modelling part, if there's anything outstanding just tell me. Now onto making the low poly, I'm thinking I should make it a full asset.

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    Now 46% more than 20% poseable.
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  • CougarJo
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    CougarJo polycounter lvl 6
    I think I see some errors.

    -The mag is way too thick, look a these picture:
    M109-pic163.jpg
    And it don't seams to have the ''waffles'' on it.


    -Look at the scope that DWalker post, the screws don't go through the scope mount.


    -Your flash hidder have very sharp edge, again, look at my picture.
  • RathSkeller
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    CougarJo wrote: »
    I think I see some errors.

    -The mag is way too thick, look a these picture:
    M109-pic163.jpg
    And it don't seams to have the ''waffles'' on it.


    -Look at the scope that DWalker post, the screws don't go through the scope mount.


    -Your flash hidder have very sharp edge, again, look at my picture.

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    This is the reference sheet I based the majority of it on.

    I'll fix the sharp edges on the flash hider when I bake the normals, and the scope is just made up; it isn't based off of anything in particular so I gave myself some leeway with what looks good.

    Thanks everyone for the CC
  • CougarJo
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    CougarJo polycounter lvl 6
    Oh ok for the mag!

    The overall shape of the scope looks ok to me, it's just the screw that doesn't make sense IMO :D

    Looking forward for textures!
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