noob 3d concept art

BI0H0G

Hi there i did a bunch of concept art using maya render i want an honest opinion on my art work

dr grim

It's simple and effective, easy to read for the most part. You might want to tone up the green on the mech, the shapes are hard to read, feels too busy and oversaturated maybe. The mechs also might need some highlights to make them pop more where it matters. Other than that it's going pretty well I'd say.

BI0H0G

thanks for the feedback, i did a quick re-touch on the last one here it is

mr grimm

not bad, I like the thunder bolt. Most of the art seems very borderlands inspired.

BI0H0G

din't notice that when working on them, but thanks for the feedback i not a good concept artist i don't know if this counts as cheating we doing in game development but i like it is quick and i don't have to worry about perspective we working on them

Prism

I like the first and third one quite a lot. Its not cheating at all. If this is the best/fastest way for you to get your ideas across then its what you should use at this time.