Hey cool start, although I'd recommend going back and fixing any anatomy issues before continuing with the clothing. Right now the arms seem quite short, the hands too big (and flat maybe, although its kinda hard to tell with the gloves) the muscles at the back of the arms don't look correct.
Also with the clothing, the cloth folds need more study - right now they look more like melted chocolate than actual folds and the laces are too thick I think. Also with the kneepad straps, they wouldn't fit round the back of the legs perfectly straight, there would be some angle to the direction they were strapped in if that makes sense, even it was slight. When sculpting try to think with the overall gesture in mind so it doesn't look too lifeless or robotic. Hope that helps and doesn't come across too harsh Keep going with it man!
Here's my current progress! I'm going to make the fingers mech as is the rest of the forearm and touch up a few areas of the render, but apart from that I think I'm almost finished
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Also with the clothing, the cloth folds need more study - right now they look more like melted chocolate than actual folds and the laces are too thick I think. Also with the kneepad straps, they wouldn't fit round the back of the legs perfectly straight, there would be some angle to the direction they were strapped in if that makes sense, even it was slight. When sculpting try to think with the overall gesture in mind so it doesn't look too lifeless or robotic. Hope that helps and doesn't come across too harsh Keep going with it man!
Thanks a lot for your feedback!
Here's my current progress - i'm working on rendering out the polypainted version now aswell, so hopefully i'll have that done this evening!
Cheers
Any feedback would be really appreciated!