New Character- PLEASE CRITIQUE WIP

SmilingMoOse

Ok, here's a new character of mine that I am working on, who he and his twin brother have horse heads/features. So knowing that i decided to just straight sculpt a horse head before I stylize it and tweak it. I did use reference, but an extra set of eyes always is helpful, so CRITIQUE PLEEEEEAAASE!!!!

rollin

hi there, first of all I would start to make the yaw line more natural looking. It's not curved that extreme.
Also define the muscles from the neck which end up under the ear.

http://www.hopevalleysaddlery.co.uk/products/881990/mt%20horse%20walker%20with%20d%20ring.jpg

Brian "Panda" Choi

Do you have a concept going in? Feels like this is a slightly blind sculpt.

SmilingMoOse

Ok cool thanks Rollin, will do. JadeEyePanda- Ir did start out as a blind sculpt, i had a concept in my head for what i wanted to do, but hadn't put it on paper yet. Having a blind sculpt feel to, is that a bad thing?

SmilingMoOse

So here's a body WIP of my horse guy. this is just a base because the characters are twins. There is one that's a heavier set guy like, I, and then a slender one, so from here i plan to proceed stylizing out-further, putting clothes on'em, and changing him(this base) to which ever brother i start with first. Crits Folks? on the horse head, idea, body/anatomy? Shoot. OOOOH speaking of the anatomy, well....nvm i'll just wait to someone mentions it. Have at it!!!