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History of Games Website-Uni assignment

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Any feedback here will be hugely appreciated.
Thanks

Matt

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  • DWalker
    The background behind the text is distracting; place a dark, semi-transparent layer between the text and the background. The background also doesn't tile well - the seams are very abrupt.

    I'd recommend getting rid of the white background around some of the images.

    Interleave the images with the text. If you aren't comfortable using Notepad as your editor, there are a number of free editors available now.
  • TortillaChips
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    TortillaChips polycounter lvl 10
    Is this Staffordshire? Don't recognize that module, is it a requirement to post it up here for feedback?

    I'm not sure what particular bit you want feedback on, but this is more for art work than marking written assignments.
  • matthewjohnson398
    Thanks for the feedback D walker, yeah Staffs.
  • GoldBlackWolf
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    GoldBlackWolf polycounter lvl 12
    Hi Matthew,

    I agree with DWalker, but you knowing that I think that won't help you. What will help you is taking a step back from what you have done and doing some preparation first i.e research other websites of a similar genre and also planning out how you want the website to look.

    At the moment the site is very thrown together , I cant see a particular design behind each page. Set out a theme: colours, picture placement, text style and size. If you want the site to have more of a blog feel rather than a full on website look at sites like Twitter and Wordpress for some inspiration on theme.

    Also TortillaChips is correct 10 fold, this site is more for 3d art work and 3d technical artistry rather than websites (even though it is about games).

    Good luck with the rest of your assignment.
  • matthewjohnson398
    Noted, thanks blackwolf, appreciated.
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