Most offices use "cool white" fluorescent lights, which have a subtle blue or green tint, as opposed to the yellow tint in your images.
The hinges on the laptops are too smooth, making it look like a bend rather than a hinge.
The ambient light seems quite high, washing out almost all of the shadows. Given the set-up - a bright window and interior lights -you have a great opportunity to show multiple soft shadows.
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The hinges on the laptops are too smooth, making it look like a bend rather than a hinge.
The ambient light seems quite high, washing out almost all of the shadows. Given the set-up - a bright window and interior lights -you have a great opportunity to show multiple soft shadows.