[WIP] looking for some feedback new here :)

Kyaaa

Greetings fellow polycount members, im currently new to this industry and hope to learn and achieve more from the comments and feedbacks i get from u all.
Currently been doing classes and was suppose to base my character on a soldier theme so i decided to go for a kinda world war 2 theme soldier in it.

so this is what i have done so far. been using 3dsmax/zbrush for like a few months and i would really like more help to see where and how i can improve my model on. im also doing side stuff to build up a demo/reel for myself. and ill be posting whatever i have been doing here.

thanks for taking the time to read.
hopefully fellow members can guide me as well too cheers XDD

PacoCasares

Have you done any sketches and drawings for the soldier and the motorcycle? Also, what do you want to aim with the motorcycle and the soldier? are they going to be together or separate? If you want constructive crit, the motorcycle looks very light, in terms that it looks simple (and unbelievable that it can run), I would get some heavy reference on motorcycles and work on the siluette and shapes of the different parts. It has to look like a vehicle that is ready to run!

For the soldier, the clothing looks a touch soft, like its mudded, perhaps sharpen the creases and add a cloth texture. Also, again, work on designs on paper so you can get a soldier with more character. As for now, it reminds me the soldier from Toy Story.

Kyaaa

Hi, Paco thanks so much for the feedback. yah i have some heavy reference for the harley davidson itself. It was still a [WIP] havent really finished out the entire model because i was doing further stuff in school.
i understand for the soldier and what ur trying to say ill try working on it more and do a update. My reference was based off different parts of clothing that has been worn/off-worn etc .. texturing and other stuff im still learning. and i hope to get more advice from u next time.
thanks alot for the feedback
hope to hear more from the community )

Kyaaa

Updated weapon / im currently doing [Thompson]