I-NO

SveinY

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Heya new char for my portfolio, gonna try to make an female char for once :P Heres the start it needs a lot of work... Hopefully at the end it will look like I-NO from Guilty gear.

Stromberg90

Nice job, nice girl.

artstream

Really nice so far! I remember your DS fan art, looking forward your final version!

SveinY

@ artstream & Stromberg90 Thanks a lot!
So I got a bit bored at sculpting and looking at her so I made her shitty guitar.

SveinY

its a damn alien!

SveinY

Back to this char... heres the bakes and only base color for the textures... Low poly is around 14k tris.

Dan!

I think you could stand to be more brave with the proportions and really push the curves of her silhouette, especially in the legs. IMO her legs look stumpy notably from the side/3/4 view.

SveinY

Far from done... need more work on textures and so on.

SveinY

Thanks Dan and daphz I will get on those issues at once If anyone else have any crits just bring it on.

ScudzAlmighty

Not sure if it's the material treatment or just the lack of texture detail/color but I was really shocked to when I saw this (in waywow) was yours. The sculpt and HP guitar are really great and good examples of not over-detailing stuff while the low just feels flat and kind of mediocre. A different expression might help as well, she looks pretty vacant right now, just kind of staring off into space. I don't know the character but she seems like she'd be more playfully-agressive, like Pink. More like this or this.

SveinY

Thanks ScudzAlmighty Trying to learn to make a good looking female char is hard since I only have focused on monsters and human males in my work xD But Yeah ur totally right the materials and textures need more work + like u said she needs a more playfully-agressive look on her face. daphz said that to me 2 hehe.