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Star Wars Rebel pilot
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ANDEWEGET
polycounter lvl 6
Jan 2013
Hello people of the internets.
Working on a rebel pilot for SW BattleCry right now.
That's what I have so far:
An older shot:
Dunno what else to say, I assume everyone knows that character/look, if not, please get out.
So... Pls crit dis!
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Athomield
Jan 2013
looks very good, one thing that the cloth folds on the trousers on top don't look very realistic.
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ANDEWEGET
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Jan 2013
Hmm, alright, will do something about that.
Meanwhile, made some progress generally
So, except from the problem with the trousers Athomield mentioned, any more crits?
EDIT: BTW, mostly the right arm appears to be too large, I think that's the perspective/angle tho.
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almighty_gir
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Jan 2013
press "p" to enable perspective mode. do not sculpt without it.
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ANDEWEGET
polycounter lvl 6
Jan 2013
Ah, thanks. Now the perspective problem is fixed, everything looks alright.
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ANDEWEGET
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Mar 2013
Here we go. I'd appreciate some more crits on this.
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Brian "Panda" Choi
high dynamic range
Mar 2013
The orange jump suit feels a tad TOO shiny, maybe a little too plastic based and not a canvas-like material.
Good draft, though.
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Meanwhile, made some progress generally
So, except from the problem with the trousers Athomield mentioned, any more crits?
EDIT: BTW, mostly the right arm appears to be too large, I think that's the perspective/angle tho.
Here we go. I'd appreciate some more crits on this.
The orange jump suit feels a tad TOO shiny, maybe a little too plastic based and not a canvas-like material.
Good draft, though.