The top image is where I left off a while back. Had some things I had to deal with so I had to set this project aside for a bit. The bottom are modifications done after some feedback. Tell me what you think. Appreciate any words of wisdom in advance.
Thanks,
Frank
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http://fbeleno.blogspot.com/2013/02/wip-higher-poly-turret.html
The texture is a bit dull. Adding some shiny bits where the metal has worn, some carbon scorching around the muzzle, and some reasonable grime/rust would help. Also, try making the light & screen emissive. Add some color; the wires could easily be colored rather than simply black, and the tanks don't need to be gray.