Game Inspired Typo - Crits please

Shrike

Hello guys,


Im not sure what i need to change, want to put it in my portfolio but it should be perfect then...
Im a student still and don't have the eye for some things yet.




Render & Model in Cinema 4D, and photoshop of course

Critique please : )

avagoyamug

Nice one, mate! The reflection seems a bit strangely placed and does not seem to Support the overall picture.