[Character] Dark Elf Assassin

Eithne

Hi all!
I'm happy to share with you my first low poly character.
She is inspired from a beautiful concept of Young-June Choi (here)
I know it's far to be perfect and I'd really like to know what do you think about it!

Done with zbrush, maya, xnormal, photoshop. Rendered in marmoset.

Thank's in advance!
Miriam

Portfolio




Maps sample




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Hi poly




Turntable: http://vimeo.com/56518399

Ckretone

This is a nice sculpt, you have cool surface detail, the only real issue I see, is a lack of a silluette. Try to make the silluete match the surface detail.

mr_ace

ha, this is the same concept that afisher's working on over here! What are the chances...

It looks good, the high poly looks nice, what's letting it down a bit currently is the textures. Most of it, especially the skin, hair and the red elements are very flat, they're essentially just the same tone with a bit of AO. you need to add some variation to the hue and brightness, especially in the skin to bring it to life.

PhoenixWolf

for your first character id say this came out pretty good, keep up the work i'm sure we'll be seeing some delicious art from you

KonstantinL

very nice! good job on the uv layout as well. But I also agree with Mr_Ace regarding the texture.

crazyfool

looks good, I think your normal maps should have a bit more punch though, might be a lighting issue?

Eithne

hey guys! Thank you very much for your feedbacks!! I really appreciate them! I'm going to fix texture colors and I'll update the thread. About normals I really don't know, it's the first time I use marmoset, perhaps I made something wrong with lights, I've to check them...

typechristopher

love the design, only thing i would critique is the hair, it lacks some specular highlights to make it look authentic

daphz

nice work man, I think your spec really needs something to be desired though, you could really push the material definition.