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Ultimate mouse trap feedback

Hey guys
Im at uni at the moment and our assignment was to create a minimum 30 second animation any feedback would be great as i can put it in my report thanks :).or just write a mark out of 10.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DqXKiAS6cKw&list=LLU9KxnkirK_FcPJEA2VoPCg&feature=mh_lolz

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  • Vanatis
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    Looks pretty good generally (to a non-animator).
    Altough you might want to redo the launching of the fireworks. It lift up before it even got enough speed.
    Also there's a black screen and weird transition around 0:54.
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