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Ravaged-Nailgun

Hi all.

Another weapon i recently did for 2Dawn. nailgun_pcl.jpg

c and c welcome.

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  • praetus
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    praetus interpolator
    Two critiques. The blood looks good on the metal but feels almost cartoony on the yellow. Also, the writing looks as if it were spray painted on but it's way too small and clean unless someone took the time to stencil it, which feels unlikely. I think it would look better if you emulated how a sharpy might write.
  • TheRealFroman
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    TheRealFroman polycounter lvl 11
    Yeah pretty much what praetus said, otherwise awesome work. I love the look of the metal in particular. The blood on the yellow sections feels very "painted on" though in my opinion, and doesnt seem like it splattered on top of the object. For example, on the lower half its only covering the yellow sections and avoids the gunmetal and tape parts completely for some reason which doesnt appear to be very realistic. If it covered a multitude of regions I think it could be much better :)
  • AJVR
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    Thanks for the crits guys!..
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