I love your concept soo much! I think there are some proportional issues with the model though. In the concept she looks more of a child; her head is bigger in comparison to her body, and her face is rounder. In general she seems to tall, her torso is especially too long, and it's missing the cute pinch of the waist that's in the concept. From the side view she seems off balance, tilting too far forward. But cool, I hope you can nail the concept because it is super nice
awesome concept. i agree the 3d needs to match the concept more, that bothered me is that shes lost her rounded childlike face, which is very cute, and the tip of the hood while in the concept is correct, in the 3d is totally wrong.
lovely concept! i think you should match the 3d more to it, your version feels longer, making it appear less cute, also some of the shapes just didn't translate so well. the breasts look more firm in the concept, the strands of hair are more curly less agressive. I really think its worth a lot to double check with your concept to give it the same nice rythm, flow and cuteness.
amile duan - Thank you! I'll work on the folds But I'll not make them like the 2D version...now I think it's a little exaggerated...maybe? Archanex - Thank you! Jessica Dinh - I totally agree, thanks a lot for the feedback! The proportions are very off, I'm trying to fix it now ^^ Aga22- Thanks! I'm having a bad time with this hood hahaha I'm working on it, but I'm tempted to start from scratch. Fnitrox- Woot! Thank you ^^ Neox - Thank you! I haven't notice how long she was until you guys pointed it out hahaha I'll keep working to fix it. $!nz- Thank you very much! Certainly I'll listen to everyone!
Yeah! Proportions looks so much better already!! Maybe the skirt is still a little too long though, and make the boots a bit taller - anything to help retain that floofy cuteness of the concept! ^_^
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Archanex - Thank you!
Jessica Dinh - I totally agree, thanks a lot for the feedback! The proportions are very off, I'm trying to fix it now ^^
Aga22- Thanks! I'm having a bad time with this hood hahaha I'm working on it, but I'm tempted to start from scratch.
Fnitrox- Woot! Thank you ^^
Neox - Thank you! I haven't notice how long she was until you guys pointed it out hahaha I'll keep working to fix it.
$!nz- Thank you very much! Certainly I'll listen to everyone!
I should have done it at the beginning!!