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1930's detective desk

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blackcloud34 polycounter lvl 7
hello everyone, this is my second post, and this is a work I had to do in one week. I had to do a detective desk of the 1930's. all the objects are assets so they can be used in others scenes.
If you have any advices or else tell me :)

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  • Mark Dygert
    Looking pretty good.

    Crits:
    - The rug looked like a dirty mattress at first.
    - The desk could use some more clutter, camera, film canisters, stacks of papers, case files, business files, invoices, bills, receipts bla bla bla. You have to transport yourself back to an analog world, The entire world lived on paper, these guys made their living by sifting through mountains of it. It's easy to crank out and relatively triangle cheap.
  • Natland
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    Natland polycounter lvl 9
    Its a good start, you should use more polys in places where they are needed though. On the metal lampshade for example. I would put more custom textures if you could on the chair to make it look like it has been sat in, you know wear and tear.

    Cool post though!

    P.S. Why are there always so many of these types of desks?
  • blackcloud34
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    blackcloud34 polycounter lvl 7
    thanks for the crits, for the paper I wanted to make more on the desk and on the ground but I didnt't have the time :/ I have to finish this in one week so it was hard ( I'm in a 3D school in france ).
    But anyway thanks for the advices :)
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